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White Collar Fic: Seeing Red

Title:  Seeing Red
Written for WC100 Prompt: -  #39 Blood
Author: dennih23
Rating: None
Spoilers:  None
Word Count: 235
Summary: A case goes wrong
Disclaimer: Jeff Eastin owns White Collar, I only wish I did






He was seething, his anger rising as he quickly marched directly at Ruiz.

Looking up, Ruiz snapped, “What the hell do you want Caffrey?”

His response was a right hook that caught Ruiz’s jaw and sent him sprawling backwards. Before he could throw another punch Jones pulled him away. Neal scowled at Ruiz and hissed, “This is your fault.”

Ruiz wiped the blood from his mouth, “You just bought yourself trouble – assaulting an FBI agent.”

Jones stood, hands on hips, between the two men. He clenched his fists, “Not so fast Ruiz, this mess falls back on you. Get your people together and get out of here. I want your reports on my desk in an hour.” Jones took Neal’s arm and walked him away.

Looking down, Neal began trembling as he noticed all the blood – Peter’s blood - that had intermingled and twisted into the blue fibers of his shirt. There was so much blood. He let out the breath he was holding when Jones laid a hand on his shoulder. As he looked up Jones nodded, “Go – be with Peter. Diana and I will take care of things here.”

Neal exhaled and whispered, “Thank you.”

He slid to a stop as he reached his fallen partner and he sank to the pavement. Blinking back tears he laid his hand on his motionless partner. Gently he murmured, “You’ll be okay, you have to be.”





Author’s Note: This is part of an idea I have for an AU where Neal is a police officer and Peter is his K9 partner – any thoughts let me know.
Thanks for reading!

Comments

( 12 comments — Leave a comment )
leesa_perrie
Jan. 26th, 2014 01:27 pm (UTC)
Oh, interesting idea! More would be lovely! :)
dennih23
Jan. 31st, 2014 01:35 am (UTC)
Thanks - I already have some ideas in mind, now I just have to put them on paper :D
embroiderama
Jan. 27th, 2014 01:10 am (UTC)
Oooh, interesting! I love Neal's fury and then his shock at all the blood.
dennih23
Jan. 31st, 2014 01:36 am (UTC)
Thank you
ladygray99
Apr. 13th, 2014 06:32 am (UTC)
Oh I love this. And in any universe Neal would probably punch the person that let Peter get hurt.
aragarna
Jul. 23rd, 2014 12:15 pm (UTC)
ouch poor Peter. This is quite powerful. I missed it the first time around.
Looking forward to more. :-)
dennih23
Jul. 25th, 2014 11:24 am (UTC)
More will be coming! I've expanded this to about 4400 words and I am about halfway through the story I want to tell. Thanks for reading.
pipilj
Jul. 26th, 2014 11:08 am (UTC)
Interesting idea would love to see the full length story
dennih23
Aug. 4th, 2014 11:57 am (UTC)
There will be more to this little story --- I have lots of it outlined, just need that time to write it. Happy that you liked this.
eldorah
Jul. 30th, 2014 01:58 am (UTC)
Oh wow!! So intense - I love this idea and would so enjoy reading more if you decided to continue!!

Thank you for sharing! :)
dennih23
Aug. 3rd, 2014 10:39 pm (UTC)
Glad you enjoyed the story. There will definitely be more, I have a whole story outlined, just trying to find the time to write it.
eldorah
Aug. 4th, 2014 03:17 am (UTC)
I know the feeling - often finding the time is harder than figuring out the story! ;)
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